مشاهدة نسخة كاملة : you love me because it is me
This is Me
05-02-2007, 02:16 AM
Hi all
this is one of my poems
I want to share it with you
and know your comments
I am not the person you want me to be
I am just me
This how I laugh
this is How I think
The way I talk
The way I sing
I think you love me because it is me
because of my personality
with my eyes
with my face
with my hair you notice me there
and I would charactrize you dreams
and you found your lost pice
so
wake up
this is me
so what do you think
رقــيــق المــشــاعــر
05-02-2007, 02:24 AM
that was a good poem
but i found some mistakes
This how I laugh
this is how i laugh
charactrize you dreams
youre dreams
thanks a lot
RQ
This is Me
05-02-2007, 02:26 AM
thank you
for your comment
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همس الخاطر
05-02-2007, 02:29 AM
Thanks for the poem This is me
it is a good one
some words have alot of meanings
I think you love me because it is me
This sentence have all the meanings
so
wake up
this is me
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:191:
good poem This is me
best wishes
Hams
This is Me
05-02-2007, 02:32 AM
thanks alot
hams
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همس الخاطر
05-02-2007, 02:32 AM
Rqiq
this mistakes can be neglected if the meaning of the sentence is reached
pice = peace
thanks This is me again
best wishes
Hams
جـــرح المـــودهـ
05-02-2007, 02:33 AM
Hi sister
good sound
you are emotive women
All you need is love, all you need is love
have a nice day
This is Me
05-02-2007, 02:34 AM
thank you
I am happy that you like it
رقــيــق المــشــاعــر
05-02-2007, 02:37 AM
pice = peace
i think it meant the lost piece which refer to her love
This is Me
05-10-2007, 03:28 AM
oh
That nice you discuss my poem
hams & Raqiq
I am happy about that
Thank you
really
thanks
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l_l_l__O_i_i_i
05-10-2007, 03:44 AM
WOW :282:
thanks on this the poem
very nice a poem
i am waiting you new :282:
This is Me
05-10-2007, 03:50 AM
Thank you dear
I am glad that you like it
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3Lo0o$ha
06-05-2007, 10:17 AM
nice poem i like it
also it has strong meaning
i want to ask u aquestion
did u write the poem by yourself or u steal it from another site ?
just question
lol
thx alot
my regards
3loosha
This is Me
06-05-2007, 07:35 PM
Hi dear
I wrote it by my self and if you see it in another site
that was also me
because I put it in another site too dear
and you can say the name of the site
thanks for bassing
Your sis
This Is Me
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