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مشاهدة نسخة كاملة : you love me because it is me


This is Me
05-02-2007, 02:16 AM
Hi all
this is one of my poems
I want to share it with you
and know your comments

I am not the person you want me to be
I am just me
This how I laugh
this is How I think
The way I talk
The way I sing
I think you love me because it is me
because of my personality
with my eyes
with my face
with my hair you notice me there
and I would charactrize you dreams
and you found your lost pice
so
wake up
this is me

so what do you think

رقــيــق المــشــاعــر
05-02-2007, 02:24 AM
that was a good poem

but i found some mistakes


This how I laugh

this is how i laugh


charactrize you dreams

youre dreams



thanks a lot

RQ

This is Me
05-02-2007, 02:26 AM
thank you
for your comment

:71:

همس الخاطر
05-02-2007, 02:29 AM
Thanks for the poem This is me


it is a good one


some words have alot of meanings


I think you love me because it is me


This sentence have all the meanings


so
wake up
this is me

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good poem This is me


best wishes


Hams

This is Me
05-02-2007, 02:32 AM
thanks alot
hams


:78:

همس الخاطر
05-02-2007, 02:32 AM
Rqiq


this mistakes can be neglected if the meaning of the sentence is reached

pice = peace



thanks This is me again


best wishes

Hams

جـــرح المـــودهـ
05-02-2007, 02:33 AM
Hi sister


good sound


you are emotive women

All you need is love, all you need is love


have a nice day

This is Me
05-02-2007, 02:34 AM
thank you

I am happy that you like it

رقــيــق المــشــاعــر
05-02-2007, 02:37 AM
pice = peace

i think it meant the lost piece which refer to her love

This is Me
05-10-2007, 03:28 AM
oh

That nice you discuss my poem
hams & Raqiq

I am happy about that

Thank you
really
thanks

:78:

l_l_l__O_i_i_i
05-10-2007, 03:44 AM
WOW :282:

thanks on this the poem

very nice a poem

i am waiting you new :282:

This is Me
05-10-2007, 03:50 AM
Thank you dear

I am glad that you like it


:78:

3Lo0o$ha
06-05-2007, 10:17 AM
nice poem i like it

also it has strong meaning

i want to ask u aquestion

did u write the poem by yourself or u steal it from another site ?

just question

lol

thx alot

my regards

3loosha

This is Me
06-05-2007, 07:35 PM
Hi dear
I wrote it by my self and if you see it in another site
that was also me

because I put it in another site too dear
and you can say the name of the site

thanks for bassing

Your sis

This Is Me