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مشاهدة نسخة كاملة : Do you want me to call you SIR or Dear?


This is Me
05-12-2007, 12:23 AM
hello all

Read these lines then tell me your opinions


Stay with me do not go away
Let me hear your voice everywhere
I am the person that you want to share
Your life ,love and even the air
You needed me in the past and today
You will not forget me in future I dare to say
Do you want me to call you Sir
and be a stranger
Or do you want me to call you dear
And show you that I care
Choose one of them and I will apply
But my feeling won,t change and I am not shy




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I hope you like it

رقــيــق المــشــاعــر
05-12-2007, 12:28 AM
fantastic lines

you have a lot of feelings and i think these feelings

push you to write these great words


five stars form me


see you

This is Me
05-12-2007, 12:31 AM
Thank you

I am happy that you like it

And 5 stars

wooow
good to know that

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:78:

همس الخاطر
05-12-2007, 01:01 AM
Actually



it is fantstic


especially


Or do you want me to call you dear
And show you that I care


I will answer as an imaginary partner with these lines



Carrying these feelings with this high rate

will fill our lives with love and remove all the hate




If you go away, I can't withstand that and wait


If you come next to me, this will be my happines's gate



refusing all what I did will make me accept my fate


Agreeing with that will make you my lovely soulmate




Excuse me for the poor writing

:150:



Thanks for your poem



best wishes

Hams




five stars

This is Me
05-12-2007, 01:19 AM
OHHHHHHHHHH
That was wonderful
Thank you hams really


:78:

Your words open the door
and made me write more

thank you

!مٍعكٍـّ صـٍرٍفًَُّّ 50!
06-02-2007, 10:27 PM
Thank you

This is Me
06-02-2007, 11:09 PM
You are welcome Mish Mish
Nice to see you here