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مشاهدة نسخة كاملة : Emotions


همس الخاطر
06-07-2007, 09:45 PM
Hi all



good evening




it is the first time that I try to describe my emotions in English


<<< naive


it is just a small words


I hope everyone read it that s/he complete it to the end



now I'll begin


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I build for you an enormous place in my heart

what are you seeing now is just a small part



I draw my feelings as love versus time chart

it increases rapidly as we be together or being apart




If I have the right to tell you what it will make it right

Let us develop our relationship more from this night



Then my way of love is shown and I have to fight

I will resist the world to stay with you every night



I hope after telling you all that, I occupied a small place in your heart

Then I will search for more, to make our soules live as one part



Sorry for not giving all my effort in this writing



I wait your comments





thank you all to read my words



best wishes


Hams

This is Me
06-07-2007, 10:10 PM
That was very nice Hams
I like your words
and
I will compose some lines later and iwill write it here

Thank you


:78:

رقــيــق المــشــاعــر
06-07-2007, 10:15 PM
nice words hams

i didn't know that you have someone in your mind


i wish that your words reach its target


rqiq

3Lo0o$ha
06-07-2007, 10:48 PM
woow hams

nice words

i didnt know that you have v.good skill in writing lets say like poetry or words that have deeply meaning

i like your subject and u deserve 3 stars

go ahead

my regards

3Lo0osha

This is Me
06-08-2007, 01:09 AM
ok
hams
this is what I wrote


The feeling cannot die
It always fly in the sky
sometime it shown as a smile
and spread its own style




:78:

همس الخاطر
06-08-2007, 01:19 AM
That was very nice Hams
I like your words
and
I will compose some lines later and iwill write it here

Thank you


Thanks


I appreciate what are you sauing about my writing

and this will push me ahead to write more words



I will be wating for your lines


and I am sure they will be fantastic as you use to compose



best regards

Hams

This is Me
06-08-2007, 01:20 AM
ok hams

look above

همس الخاطر
06-08-2007, 01:27 AM
nice words hams

i didn't know that you have someone in your mind


i wish that your words reach its target


rqiq


Thanks Rqiq for visiting and signing this visit with your reply


nd I hope that my words reach to their target


and if not I will write more and more because the emotions can't be kept without show them




best regards


Hams

همس الخاطر
06-08-2007, 01:40 AM
woow hams

nice words

i didnt know that you have v.good skill in writing lets say like poetry or words that have deeply meaning

i like your subject and u deserve 3 stars

go ahead

my regards

3Lo0osha



ooooooooooooh


look who are replying here


it is 3looosha


my topics miss her replys for along time


I am glad for seeing her reply

I wish you good grades in your studying




Thanks to sign your reply in my topic



and this is the first time that I try to write words with deeply meanings



and I am glad that you like them


and this will make me put more effort in the writing



Thanks for the stars



best regards

Hams

همس الخاطر
06-08-2007, 02:06 AM
ok hams

look above


Sorry, I was replying while you are putting your reply


:$




ok
hams
this is what I wrote


The feeling cannot die
It always fly in the sky
sometime it shown as a smile
and spread its own style


as usual nice words with a special taste



and I will reply by


the light from your smile will fill my life

your words cut my heart as butter and knife




Thanks for your words

and I am greatful that you reply in this topic


best wishes

Hams

مكفوخه بقـدّر
06-08-2007, 03:00 PM
hiiiiiz

:158:

it is the first time that I try to describe my emotions in English

go a waaaaay



<===Get out


:150:



I build for you an enormous place in my heart

what are you seeing now is just a small part



I draw my feelings as love versus time chart

it increases rapidly as we be together or being apart




If I have the right to tell you what it will make it right

Let us develop our relationship more from this night



Then my way of love is shown and I have to fight

I will resist the world to stay with you every night



I hope after telling you all that, I occupied a small place in your heart

Then I will search for more, to make our soules live as one part


really nice
:)


true it is the first time that reflect the emotions in this format



I wish you continued excellence




:62:








برايفت همس ((
:55:

كيف بس الرد اتحدى تكتب مثله <==عيب يا بت

))



:55:

همس الخاطر
06-10-2007, 08:29 AM
Hi


welcome mk mk


ti is nice to see your replay in my posts




go a waaaaay



<===Get out

:190:


as usual


:)





really nice



true it is the first time that reflect the emotions in this format



I wish you continued excellence


thanks for what you said and signing you name in my topic




private for mk mk ( hhhhhhhhhhh nice replay and I can't comment on it)mm:)



best wishes


Hams

E v e
07-13-2007, 03:09 PM
a very lovely thought .... i appreciate ur efforts

and waiting for more

¨°o.O[ Princess ] O.o°¨
07-13-2007, 04:12 PM
nice word hamas

i like it v.much

we r waiting the next emotion

my regards


Princess

همس الخاطر
07-14-2007, 08:44 AM
a very lovely thought .... i appreciate ur efforts

and waiting for more


Thanks khajal for your nice replay


I am glad that your name appeared in my topic


I really appreciate that




best wishes


Hams

همس الخاطر
07-31-2007, 09:02 AM
nice word hamas

i like it v.much

we r waiting the next emotion

my regards


Princess

Thanks for passing by princess


I wish you good vacation



best wishes

Hams