مشاهدة نسخة كاملة : Emotions
همس الخاطر
06-07-2007, 09:45 PM
Hi all
good evening
it is the first time that I try to describe my emotions in English
<<< naive
it is just a small words
I hope everyone read it that s/he complete it to the end
now I'll begin
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I build for you an enormous place in my heart
what are you seeing now is just a small part
I draw my feelings as love versus time chart
it increases rapidly as we be together or being apart
If I have the right to tell you what it will make it right
Let us develop our relationship more from this night
Then my way of love is shown and I have to fight
I will resist the world to stay with you every night
I hope after telling you all that, I occupied a small place in your heart
Then I will search for more, to make our soules live as one part
Sorry for not giving all my effort in this writing
I wait your comments
thank you all to read my words
best wishes
Hams
This is Me
06-07-2007, 10:10 PM
That was very nice Hams
I like your words
and
I will compose some lines later and iwill write it here
Thank you
:78:
رقــيــق المــشــاعــر
06-07-2007, 10:15 PM
nice words hams
i didn't know that you have someone in your mind
i wish that your words reach its target
rqiq
3Lo0o$ha
06-07-2007, 10:48 PM
woow hams
nice words
i didnt know that you have v.good skill in writing lets say like poetry or words that have deeply meaning
i like your subject and u deserve 3 stars
go ahead
my regards
3Lo0osha
This is Me
06-08-2007, 01:09 AM
ok
hams
this is what I wrote
The feeling cannot die
It always fly in the sky
sometime it shown as a smile
and spread its own style
:78:
همس الخاطر
06-08-2007, 01:19 AM
That was very nice Hams
I like your words
and
I will compose some lines later and iwill write it here
Thank you
Thanks
I appreciate what are you sauing about my writing
and this will push me ahead to write more words
I will be wating for your lines
and I am sure they will be fantastic as you use to compose
best regards
Hams
This is Me
06-08-2007, 01:20 AM
ok hams
look above
همس الخاطر
06-08-2007, 01:27 AM
nice words hams
i didn't know that you have someone in your mind
i wish that your words reach its target
rqiq
Thanks Rqiq for visiting and signing this visit with your reply
nd I hope that my words reach to their target
and if not I will write more and more because the emotions can't be kept without show them
best regards
Hams
همس الخاطر
06-08-2007, 01:40 AM
woow hams
nice words
i didnt know that you have v.good skill in writing lets say like poetry or words that have deeply meaning
i like your subject and u deserve 3 stars
go ahead
my regards
3Lo0osha
ooooooooooooh
look who are replying here
it is 3looosha
my topics miss her replys for along time
I am glad for seeing her reply
I wish you good grades in your studying
Thanks to sign your reply in my topic
and this is the first time that I try to write words with deeply meanings
and I am glad that you like them
and this will make me put more effort in the writing
Thanks for the stars
best regards
Hams
همس الخاطر
06-08-2007, 02:06 AM
ok hams
look above
Sorry, I was replying while you are putting your reply
:$
ok
hams
this is what I wrote
The feeling cannot die
It always fly in the sky
sometime it shown as a smile
and spread its own style
as usual nice words with a special taste
and I will reply by
the light from your smile will fill my life
your words cut my heart as butter and knife
Thanks for your words
and I am greatful that you reply in this topic
best wishes
Hams
مكفوخه بقـدّر
06-08-2007, 03:00 PM
hiiiiiz
:158:
it is the first time that I try to describe my emotions in English
go a waaaaay
<===Get out
:150:
I build for you an enormous place in my heart
what are you seeing now is just a small part
I draw my feelings as love versus time chart
it increases rapidly as we be together or being apart
If I have the right to tell you what it will make it right
Let us develop our relationship more from this night
Then my way of love is shown and I have to fight
I will resist the world to stay with you every night
I hope after telling you all that, I occupied a small place in your heart
Then I will search for more, to make our soules live as one part
really nice
:)
true it is the first time that reflect the emotions in this format
I wish you continued excellence
:62:
برايفت همس ((
:55:
كيف بس الرد اتحدى تكتب مثله <==عيب يا بت
))
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همس الخاطر
06-10-2007, 08:29 AM
Hi
welcome mk mk
ti is nice to see your replay in my posts
go a waaaaay
<===Get out
:190:
as usual
:)
really nice
true it is the first time that reflect the emotions in this format
I wish you continued excellence
thanks for what you said and signing you name in my topic
private for mk mk ( hhhhhhhhhhh nice replay and I can't comment on it)mm:)
best wishes
Hams
E v e
07-13-2007, 03:09 PM
a very lovely thought .... i appreciate ur efforts
and waiting for more
¨°o.O[ Princess ] O.o°¨
07-13-2007, 04:12 PM
nice word hamas
i like it v.much
we r waiting the next emotion
my regards
Princess
همس الخاطر
07-14-2007, 08:44 AM
a very lovely thought .... i appreciate ur efforts
and waiting for more
Thanks khajal for your nice replay
I am glad that your name appeared in my topic
I really appreciate that
best wishes
Hams
همس الخاطر
07-31-2007, 09:02 AM
nice word hamas
i like it v.much
we r waiting the next emotion
my regards
Princess
Thanks for passing by princess
I wish you good vacation
best wishes
Hams
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