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مشاهدة نسخة كاملة : Once Upon Time


This is Me
06-17-2007, 01:33 AM
Hello every one


Once upon time she begins her story
Telling her children about her glory
About her youth about her beauty
The sun shines on one fine day
And she was on her way
To the place she wants to stay
Suddenly, she found a small box
Covered with dust
She tried to open it
but it was locked
Then she searched and found the key
She was glad and happy
She found a mirror inside
Written on it
You found your self at last

I hope you will like it


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همس الخاطر
06-17-2007, 01:49 AM
very nice words


it has a music tone


as usual you are the best in writing English poem here


waiting for more fantastic poems



best wishes


Hams

This is Me
06-17-2007, 01:52 AM
Thank you hams

I am really glad that you like it


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رقــيــق المــشــاعــر
06-17-2007, 02:10 AM
good words

at the beginning you did a very nice effort

but at last you lost your poem and wrote different sentences

with different tons .

I hope you get what I tried to illustrate


see you

RQ

This is Me
06-17-2007, 02:12 AM
Thank you Raqiq
and you are right

Thank you
and I am happy to see your replay

عيون الغزلان
06-17-2007, 04:51 AM
good words


" Thank so much "This is me

&

I am wait to write a new project





Auoon

This is Me
06-17-2007, 04:53 AM
Thank you dear
ohhhhh
wonerful to see your comment


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