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مشاهدة نسخة كاملة : Song


This is Me
07-13-2007, 02:40 PM
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these lines are not very good
But I like to share them with you

See you soon
My lovely moon
Don;t ask me why
This is not a good bye
I must be alone
To compose a song
About one day
Of my holiday
With drops of rain
That earse my pain
And you were there
With your wavy hair


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Waiting for comments

Mi$s.5o5a
07-15-2007, 07:53 AM
cool and

I liked it very much

Honey

Thank you Again

This is Me
07-15-2007, 01:38 PM
Thanks dear

Happy to see your comment

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همس الخاطر
07-31-2007, 01:10 PM
they are good lines


I will comment on them as an imaginary person

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See you soon
My lovely moon
Don;t ask me why
This is not a good bye
I must be alone
To compose a song
About one day
Of my holiday
With drops of rain
That earse my pain
And you were there
With your wavy hair


I hope this soon will not be very long

so soon may I consider it a decade what will happen to me if you said soon


:(


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and I will reply as an imaginary person by


I can not wait for such a long time

so come here and make me fine



I will erase your pain with my touch

I will kill myself if it is not enough


with love and happines I will end this pain

so at the end our souls will feel the same


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thanks for your lines This is me


waiting for more




best wishes

Hams

S A R A
07-31-2007, 01:18 PM
thanks this is me

its sweet words

This is Me
07-31-2007, 01:26 PM
they are good lines


I will comment on them as an imaginary person

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I hope this soon will not be very long

so soon may I consider it a decade what will happen to me if you said soon


:(


:190:




and I will reply as an imaginary person by


I can not wait for such a long time

so come here and make me fine



I will erase your pain with my touch

I will kill myself if it is not enough


with love and happines I will end this pain

so at the end our souls well feel the same


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thanks for your lines This is me


waiting for more




best wishes

Hams



Thank you Hams

I like your lines very much

they are better than mine

I am really happy to see your comment


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This is Me
07-31-2007, 01:29 PM
http://www.rjaah.com/vb/uploaded-7/3622---k.jpgthanks this is me

its sweet words

Hi dear


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Glad to see you here

SWEETY


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