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مشاهدة نسخة كاملة : ..:: You Closed The Door ::..


رقــيــق المــشــاعــر
08-17-2007, 05:37 PM
hi there


i managed to write some of my feeling


but i think it is very simple writing


i hope you like it




Sometimes I feel the sad is over

Oh no

You still so far it won’t be over


Stop playing and come to your lover

I need someone to share my life

Hold me as a husband and a wife


Feel my breath feel my soul

And if you can’t come

Try to call

When you left me

You killed the hope

And walk away and never looked back

So the sad increased more and more

And when I reached you

And try to explain

I saw you smiling

Then simply …

You closed the door




best regards

RQIQ

This is Me
08-18-2007, 02:26 AM
Wondrful words Raqiq
Simple and deep
I really enjoyed reading your lovely lines

And when I reached you

And try to explain

I saw you smiling

Then simply …

You closed the door

beautiful
What can I say more than that


:164:

رقــيــق المــشــاعــر
08-27-2007, 11:43 PM
this is me

I’m happy that you liked it


thanks for the encouragement


(red rose )


See you

b r a n d y
08-29-2007, 02:50 PM
that's painful

:"(







keep it up our chikspear

سمو الاحساس
08-30-2007, 08:27 AM
really beautiful



r y a n

رقــيــق المــشــاعــر
08-31-2007, 04:57 PM
that's painful

:"(







keep it up our chikspear


thanks for your words


i like to be chikspear :150:

b r a n d y
09-01-2007, 08:55 AM
loooooooooooool


bro watch out !
chikspear was gay

^^

(Just kidden you)

همس الخاطر
09-09-2007, 05:16 PM
nice words which has deep meanings



I will answer for these lines as an imaginary partner


:150:


this smile was just an invitment

you consider it as a disagreement


I do not know why you do that

you closed the door before the start


:150:



thanks for your lines


best wishes

Hams

رقــيــق المــشــاعــر
09-09-2007, 05:28 PM
hi hms




this smile was just an invitment

you consider it as a disagreement


I do not know why you do that

you closed the door before the start


you got it wrong ..


smiling means that there is nothing to say and to explain


and as a result she closed the door


it is a sing of the end of that relation


thanks for your effort