A Sweet River Across My Sea

[همس الخاطر]

Hello



How are you all?



Here is my new poem that talks about a true story that happened to me a week ago

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I wish that you like it

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It is the second time

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Hello, how are you my dear?

Listen to me and come near



I will tell you about a true story

It happened accidentaly in my birthday



After I slept, there was a dream

It concerns me and you as a lovely team



I was running in a freaking place

Holding a gun and a small suitcase



All what I am concerned about was my saftey

Until I found a group of girls in my way



From all of them I chose you and left the rest

I let you following me and fight for your best



I found that my saftey is not important any more

Keeping you as my treasure is concerned me more



After leading you to a safe place

I handed you my gun and my suitcase



With a warm goodbye I left you there

To open a way to eternal love without a fear



I fought bare-handed and scratched my body

With my blood and pain I reached the destiny



Then I came back to you after removing this plug

You welcomed me greatly with a smile and a warm hug



Then I opened my eyes and my lips begin their smile

It was a fantastic dream with a girl whom I only love



Then I know that loving you is just something wrong

I am dying for you all the times, isn’t it more strong?



Fourteen lines talked about a true story that happened

And I have a last one that will reached to my beloved



From all the members I will say here is me

And you are a sweet river across my sea


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I hope that you ejoyed reading these lines.

[This is Me]

Lovely Lines
again


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What I read was so wonderful

You can read my comment here
I like the words you reveal


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wooow

fantastic dream is very nice
I wishing to occurs really with who you love :)

thanks on the poem

[همس الخاطر]

Lovely Lines
again

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thanks for passing by again



What I read was so wonderful

You can read my comment here
I like the words you reveal


such a reply will encourage me to write

and give me moer effort to begin the fight


:158:


thanks for your nice reply this is me



best wishes

Hams

[همس الخاطر]

wooow

fantastic dream is very nice
I wishing to occurs really with who you love

thanks on the poem


the dream was fantastic but also scary


thanks for your nice reply




best wishes

Hams